Yesterday i was doing Connected Day! we had Lot's of fun there and i will tell you...
Where?: We went to the OGC'S sin ma to see what we were going to do we were going to do Survive in the Wiled i was doing drama.
What?: When we were done then we went to our places i went to LH1 when we went inside then we all saw the kids and learning coach's were fake dead so we had to think what we had to do first we had to look around if nothing happens to us then we had to say "can you hear me" that's what we needed to do.
who?: I went with Mr dyer , miss Morgan and miss baba we all went to LH1 and saw what happened.
How?: How did it happen well we all were saying that it must be a tornado but it's all fake.
Why?: Why i went there because i thinked it was going to be fun lot's of fun.
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ReplyDeleteSharon Lu, your feedback buddy.